Thursday, March 14, 2013

Jake Halo - Episode 2


2 comments:

  1. What is Jake Halo about. Could we get a brief discription of his character. What is his mission or purpose. What culture, planet, ? I guess what I am trying to say, so far I am lost with this story. The art work is excellent. I enjoy your color choices and such details. Could you make the print a little large, I have a hard time reading the words. Please
    God Bless :-)

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  2. Jake and Marie Halo are folks who enjoy a grand adventure. Looking for those opportunites to assist those that can't assist themselves. This is still set on "Irth" so I have the latitude to "change" history, geography, etc. to fit the storyline. Much the same way I did with the first story arc. The story thus far has Jake and Marie on a mission for the U.S. Embassy, they are looking into the overall condition of the Ottoman Empire in the early 1900's. The winds of war are blowing and once solid empires are starting to crumble, from within. I don't want to give too much away so you'll just have to keep checking back.
    I will play with the font size to be more readable. I am also adjusting color and page design as well. So please, your comments are always welcome. I enjoy telling you these stories.

    Thanks,

    Gary

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